Show+Don't+Tell

= Show! Don't Tell! = //Directions: Examine the following passages. Note that the second story “shows” rather “tells.”//

//Passage A// My mornings are crazy. I am rushing all the time. Sometimes I miss my bus and arrive late to school.

//Passage B// I awaken to the annoying buzz of my alarm clock at 6:30 a.m. I am anything but ready to face the day ahead of me. I drag myself to the bathroom, where I brush my teeth, take a quick shower, and wash and dry my hair. After changing outfits three or four times, I run down the stairs, let my dog out, and inhale my breakfast. I scramble for my books and jacket, then race out the front door. I barely make it to my bus on time. Once in the seat, I heave a sigh of relief because I will not be late to school today.

Change the following tells to shows:

1. The mall is crowded. 2. Homework is a drag. 3. It was cold outside. 4. My friends are nice. 5. Korean food is tasty.